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Kesha
is on page 114 of 265
The story confuses me. When did they leave to get the tattoo? How long was Sunnie at Pyro house the second time? When did she give Lisa details about night 2 for her to have that insight? When was Pyro mentioned to her dad?
The story transitions are bad. It’s not clear when certain things happen and I’m staring to spend more time questioning when then progressing.
— Mar 20, 2026 05:25AM
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The story transitions are bad. It’s not clear when certain things happen and I’m staring to spend more time questioning when then progressing.
Kesha
is on page 164 of 265
A lot of inconsistencies in the stories transition. But still overall seems to be an interesting story.
— Mar 19, 2026 05:41AM
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