Status Updates From Dawn of the Firebird

It’s trying to do too much in one novel, so the story and emotions become shallow as a result. I don’t believe Khamilla’s loyalty or motivations because we never see her develop them, especially with her Imperial family. I think the story would have worked much better as a duology

The physical healing and stress she is put under is not convincing. She is constantly breaking bones and then continuing to train

Okay!! Final stretch! Let's do this!

How much can one person take!? Sweet cheese!

Well, holy sh!t!

Not sure what the author was trying to achieve with this because i don't think I've ever detested an MC as much as I do this one. How do you manage to condemn the only person who has ever cared for you ?

This book was getting slow but it's picking up again thank goodness