Status Updates From The Pandora Chronicles, Boo...

There is soooooo much telling in this. A lot of descriptions of how people look. It's not great this far...but I'll give it some more pages before I give up.

I still want to get out my sparkly green marker (no using red for me!), but the pace in this section is significantly better, and it's correspondingly more enjoyable.

Aaaagh (arrrr?), it's so close to being good, but there's just things getting in the way! Awkward dialogue, continuing sketchy grammar/attention to detail, and the odd jarring scene change. It really takes you out of the story, and it's driving me mental. Hopefully part 2 will see an up-swing!

Enjoying it so far, but the copy-editing is killing me.

I'm not complaining (yet!) but it's a bit... Skimmable, so far. Nothing has gripped my attention yet.

On Part 2 of the book now... Lovin' it!!!