Laura May’s Reviews > The Pandora Chronicles, Book 1 > Status Update
Laura May
is 30% done
Aaaagh (arrrr?), it's so close to being good, but there's just things getting in the way! Awkward dialogue, continuing sketchy grammar/attention to detail, and the odd jarring scene change. It really takes you out of the story, and it's driving me mental. Hopefully part 2 will see an up-swing!
— Feb 14, 2015 07:02AM
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Laura May
is 51% done
I still want to get out my sparkly green marker (no using red for me!), but the pace in this section is significantly better, and it's correspondingly more enjoyable.
— Feb 15, 2015 01:57PM
Laura May
is 11% done
Enjoying it so far, but the copy-editing is killing me.
— Feb 13, 2015 11:18AM
