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Pati
is 70% done
OMDG! I overlooked all the little obviously "non American" words but come off it.... meters?! Are you kidding me?
— May 11, 2015 01:14PM
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Pati
is 67% done
What's with starting so many sentences with "Ah"? Damn, I had such high hopes for this.
— May 11, 2015 01:03PM
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Pati
is 40% done
I sure wish this had better editing. Grammar errors, vocabulary errors, missing words, misspelled words.... And I'm sorry but if someone answers the door you're not seeing their ass. A good editor would have caught that. -sigh-
— May 11, 2015 10:33AM
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Ash
is 67% done
What the fuck is a VANILLA folder? Do you mean Manila? Wow.
— Feb 23, 2015 11:56AM
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Ash
is 60% done
The fuck? Is she really threatening his life for a guy? And a fake-perfection asshole is it is? Totally unrealistic.
— Feb 23, 2015 11:46AM
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Ash
is 47% done
Really, must have absurdly large dick on top of other perfection qualities? Oh, and must fuck on first date, of course. *eye roll*
— Feb 23, 2015 11:24AM
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Ash
is 45% done
Are we in high school? It's so cheesy that Becky just pops up randomly and fucks things up. And then follows them to fuck more things up. So ridiculous.
— Feb 23, 2015 11:19AM
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Catherine
is 23% done
What was the point in rushing all of those conversations - cramming them into one - and dissolving the tension in 2.5 seconds?! Wasted opportunity, if you ask me.
— Feb 07, 2015 07:52PM
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Sherry F
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Um...after an 11-year absence, we're already spilling our guts? And no one had to be drunk to do it?
— May 20, 2013 04:16PM
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Adrianamae
is 60% done
Dear God, this is pure melodrama with tons of plot devises and an unbelievable psycho ex who should twirl a mustache, but since she's a woman, she can't.
— May 07, 2013 09:56AM
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