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Oh good, at least Conor might be realising Noelle's overbearing dad got them split up. That's been an obvious plot twist.

Oh god, a derivative break up for tension? Really?! There were so many other potential routes!

This is a lesson on why you don't go back to your ex

Wish I had the money to ditch a laptop just to make a point

If you thought the sex addiction was a joke (and it is) why did you include it as a potential excuse, Noelle?!

That spit take came out of nowhere, her hands were in her book.

Also there's a horrible bit with speech marks in the middle of someone talking, but it's not a reference. More like a dialogue tag got deleted and the punctuation never removed

"He never would've kissed you if he thought we were over for good" isn't saying what you think it's saying, I think you mean "he only would've kissed you if he thoughts we were over for good" otherwise Conor is intentionally a cheater, babes

I thought they were in Conor’s room, not Noelle’s?

On a balcony? Really?! Also they never wear protection, crazy

Some of this narrative is unnecessarily repetitive. Don’t need to be told again about Ashley’s ex going into rehab

Noelle “works hard” except I haven’t seen her working. She’s socialising on the bus, delegating her social media work to a dancer, and hitting on the talent.

Literally only continuing and not DNFing for the Ashley subplot. The most interesting part of this!

Ma'am, how would pool water get into and remain in your nethers? That's a completely different sensations. I ... I can't even ... wow

By boob or my boob?

It’s a decent enough story. I’m intrigued by the Ashley plot. It’s not ready for publishing yet

Was this book even edited? It (the door) turned instead of Conor. Noelle is given a 15 minute warning for a meeting then 2 paragraphs later it’s “with 15 minutes to go until the meeting” these are easy mistakes to catch with a line editor! Ericson is allegedly a prolific writer!

That throat thing sounds weird. Like he was trying to sucker punch her

I’m glad the miscommunication wasn’t dragged out. It was obvious and would have been annoying

She twisted her to the side … twisted her what?

I thought the show was sold out? Also a bit weird that this tour hasn’t been sold out the better part of a year, but mainly the lack of continuity concerns me when we’re only a third of the way through so far

After a few hours one guy stopped playing video games and went for a nap on the tour bus. But I thought it was a 3 hour drive?

Okay this is the second time it’s been mentioned, but I’ve never heard of people being stopped from taking pictures or recording concerts. Part of the excitement of the current MCR tour is seeing the videos, learning the narrative between songs. That part’s weird to me.

Do we really need to refer to women as bitches? That could make a girl DNF