Siobhan’s Reviews > Rebooting Conor Flynn: Second Chance Popstar Romcom > Status Update

Oh good, at least Conor might be realising Noelle's overbearing dad got them split up. That's been an obvious plot twist.

Oh god, a derivative break up for tension? Really?! There were so many other potential routes!

This is a lesson on why you don't go back to your ex

Wish I had the money to ditch a laptop just to make a point

If you thought the sex addiction was a joke (and it is) why did you include it as a potential excuse, Noelle?!

That spit take came out of nowhere, her hands were in her book.

Also there's a horrible bit with speech marks in the middle of someone talking, but it's not a reference. More like a dialogue tag got deleted and the punctuation never removed

"He never would've kissed you if he thought we were over for good" isn't saying what you think it's saying, I think you mean "he only would've kissed you if he thoughts we were over for good" otherwise Conor is intentionally a cheater, babes

I thought they were in Conor’s room, not Noelle’s?

On a balcony? Really?! Also they never wear protection, crazy

Some of this narrative is unnecessarily repetitive. Don’t need to be told again about Ashley’s ex going into rehab

Noelle “works hard” except I haven’t seen her working. She’s socialising on the bus, delegating her social media work to a dancer, and hitting on the talent.

Literally only continuing and not DNFing for the Ashley subplot. The most interesting part of this!