Status Updates From Boss (Boss #1)

I really dislike Levi.

// “Did you go?” Joshua tossed the half-finished cigarette out into the road and huffed out the last of the smoke, wiping the raindrop from his beard.”

~ Fantastic, you’ve created an asshole who’s also a littering asshole 😡😡😡!!

// Also, not to say that all English know English, but you ARE English, so shouldn’t you know a little bit of English, dear author!?!?

// I am getting rid of just a few books on my shelf that I’ve purchased a long time ago and really really really wanna be done with! I have to say though that this quote, on the first page, already has me a bit irritated! Where is the editing? Look —> “It felt like an omen, telling him to run back inside to jump on the first leaving flight.”

Leaving flight?! Seriously?! It’s DEPARTING flight, get it right!

I'm really liking the plot in this one. Great job of upping the tension. Even without the sex, it'd be a good story.

when the glass doors are a-rockin', don't come a-knockin'

"It gets easier. You forget to stop crying. You put up walls and eventually you never cry. You can’t. You hide behind the walls and the façade and people start to believe it. You start to believe it yourself."

So good so far! Though I keep finding myself wanting to jump inside the pages and give the characters a good slap