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// “Did you go?” Joshua tossed the half-finished cigarette out into the road and huffed out the last of the smoke, wiping the raindrop from his beard.”

~ Fantastic, you’ve created an asshole who’s also a littering asshole 😡😡😡!!

// I am getting rid of just a few books on my shelf that I’ve purchased a long time ago and really really really wanna be done with! I have to say though that this quote, on the first page, already has me a bit irritated! Where is the editing? Look —> “It felt like an omen, telling him to run back inside to jump on the first leaving flight.”

Leaving flight?! Seriously?! It’s DEPARTING flight, get it right!