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// I am getting rid of just a few books on my shelf that I’ve purchased a long time ago and really really really wanna be done with! I have to say though that this quote, on the first page, already has me a bit irritated! Where is the editing? Look —> “It felt like an omen, telling him to run back inside to jump on the first leaving flight.”
Leaving flight?! Seriously?! It’s DEPARTING flight, get it right!
— Mar 25, 2020 12:41PM
Leaving flight?! Seriously?! It’s DEPARTING flight, get it right!
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// “Did you go?” Joshua tossed the half-finished cigarette out into the road and huffed out the last of the smoke, wiping the raindrop from his beard.”
~ Fantastic, you’ve created an asshole who’s also a littering asshole 😡😡😡!!
— Mar 25, 2020 02:26PM
~ Fantastic, you’ve created an asshole who’s also a littering asshole 😡😡😡!!
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// Also, not to say that all English know English, but you ARE English, so shouldn’t you know a little bit of English, dear author!?!?
— Mar 25, 2020 12:42PM
