Status Updates From Mist Revealed

A lil' bit of plot...a whole lot of sex. A lil' bit of plot...a whole lot of sex. zzzzz

The world is apparently coming to its end, and I got a H/h who just met, who want to screw more than they want to help save the world. This book is already irritating the crap outta' me, but I'll TRY to read to its conclusion.

Whoa, hold your horses!! H just bumped in to the H on the street, he scared her with his eyes, next thing she is all over him like a rash, being carried to his home and she still does not know his name?! There is fast and there is ludicrous. Also having problem with writing style - short, abrupt sentences, no feel of the flow. Last thing : if h is so smart why is she wearing mismatched shoes and she knows that?

Whoa, hold your horses!! H just bumped in to the H on the street, he scared her with his eyes, next thing she is all over him like a rash, being carried to his home and she still does not know his name?! There is fast and there is ludicrous. Also having problem with writing style - short, abrupt sentences, no feel of the flow. Last thing : if h is so smart why is she wearing mismatched shoes and she knows that?

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