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Katrina
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Whoa, hold your horses!! H just bumped in to the H on the street, he scared her with his eyes, next thing she is all over him like a rash, being carried to his home and she still does not know his name?! There is fast and there is ludicrous. Also having problem with writing style - short, abrupt sentences, no feel of the flow. Last thing : if h is so smart why is she wearing mismatched shoes and she knows that?
— Sep 07, 2015 04:09PM
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Katrina
is 10% done
Whoa, hold your horses!! H just bumped in to the H on the street, he scared her with his eyes, next thing she is all over him like a rash, being carried to his home and she still does not know his name?! There is fast and there is ludicrous. Also having problem with writing style - short, abrupt sentences, no feel of the flow. Last thing : if h is so smart why is she wearing mismatched shoes and she knows that?
— Sep 06, 2015 08:31PM
