Status Updates From A Mess of Reason

*Sigh* Romance book boyfriend here - so prefect (and therefore fake) it hurts. No one talk like that, and certainly no guy. Too unrealistic.

Well, the first third was 29 year olds sounding and acting like 20 years olds and the next part seems to be about some personal tragedy that means she *doesn't* want a deep, meaningful relationship. So far, this is getting an emphatic thumbs-down from me.

Where has this man been all my life??????

"She so aroused I can tell she seconds from coming."

Punctuation and proof-reading are clutch :/

Great moving at a fast pace, keeping me hooked on larger story...

So much sex and dirty talk

Eh.. The way they talk and the way they think about each other... Yikes! :s

Gooood God in heaven!!!!!