Status Updates From Scrapper: MMA Badboy Romance

Adding to the other review... she cares more about her job and writing than him. She’s really just using him to get ahead in her career and make her site popular. I left off where he’s in jail for a fight and she’s posting about it and getting calls for interviews because she saw the fight firsthand. Also not enough dialogue.

I’m actually mad I bought this book. The sample deceived me. Making me think it was a good bad boy romance when really it’s not or so far it’s not. He doesn’t really have a bad boy persona, just him blowing off what everyone says to him. And he’s not serious enough for me to call him that.

Another mistake: "weary" is used in place of "wary"

Elevator doors swing open, do they? I am being super nit-picky but I can't seem to help it.

"That shits dumb." - our articulate hero, Cage. I'm trying so hard not to be annoyed by the missing apostrophe...

A few errors so far, such as the sentence which describes how Cage's opponent "threw a few wild haymakers" that were "both off mark"--it can't be "a few" and two, c'mon--but, as much as mistakes like that irk me, I can forgive them... But misspelt words drive me absolutely nuts. What the hell is "bizerk"? The word is berserk. Berserk!!!