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Elevator doors swing open, do they? I am being super nit-picky but I can't seem to help it.
— Jun 06, 2016 08:49AM
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"That shits dumb." - our articulate hero, Cage. I'm trying so hard not to be annoyed by the missing apostrophe...
— Jun 06, 2016 08:43AM
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A few errors so far, such as the sentence which describes how Cage's opponent "threw a few wild haymakers" that were "both off mark"--it can't be "a few" and two, c'mon--but, as much as mistakes like that irk me, I can forgive them... But misspelt words drive me absolutely nuts. What the hell is "bizerk"? The word is berserk. Berserk!!!
— Jun 06, 2016 08:28AM
