Status Updates From One Step Closer

I like Caleb less with every page, and I just can’t with Macy’s presence. I tried hard but this struggle doesn’t feel worth it. DNFing.

So, this punctuation is all over the place, and the H is on some whiny rich boy ish and isn’t very likable. This is feeling like a DNF…

The H has referred to the h’s mom/his stepmom as a bitch 10x now. Not cute. Calling a woman you dislike misogynistic slurs and trying to justify it with “well she’s bad or I don’t like her” is as kosher as trying to justify calling a poc you don’t like a racial slur. Just sayin.

If you’re gonna do a sex scene before the first chapter make it good. And so far, Caleb’s I’m a poor little rich boy who’s gonna rebel to piss off my dad while I misogynistically insult my stepmom schtick ain’t cute at all.

Sì, sono già al 30%... perché l'unica scena con i protagonisti è stata nel prologo. Poi, più nulla. Separazione e salto temporale. So già che sarà un disastro...