Status Updates From Optical Illusion (Paint #1)
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Alli
is 38% done
Not sure if I want to finish this one. I was not expecting this content at all and it's rather upsetting.
— Jun 15, 2019 08:26PM
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Roberta Blablanski
is 15% done
I'm going to have to come back to this another time. It's not for me right now.
— Jan 08, 2019 05:13AM
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kimberly_rose
is 60% done
I have lost interest in these characters. The writing is just too jarring and uneven in development of the relationships. Also, the mystery is an ill-fitting addition to the formerly relationship-focused story. Just all around odd mesh attempt that doesn’t succeed.
— Dec 01, 2018 04:53PM
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kimberly_rose
is 55% done
The sexual tension is all off. I gotta say, I’m not really liking this story. It has odd, jarring plot moves and kinda... awkward sexual development. I mean, they barely know each other and Chris’s sexual interpretations are so different from Jase’s. Just... awkward and odd. Also, repetitive. Which is boring.
— Dec 01, 2018 04:50PM
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