kimberly_rose’s Reviews > Optical Illusion > Status Update
kimberly_rose
is 55% done
The sexual tension is all off. I gotta say, I’m not really liking this story. It has odd, jarring plot moves and kinda... awkward sexual development. I mean, they barely know each other and Chris’s sexual interpretations are so different from Jase’s. Just... awkward and odd. Also, repetitive. Which is boring.
— Dec 01, 2018 04:50PM
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kimberly_rose
is 60% done
I have lost interest in these characters. The writing is just too jarring and uneven in development of the relationships. Also, the mystery is an ill-fitting addition to the formerly relationship-focused story. Just all around odd mesh attempt that doesn’t succeed.
— Dec 01, 2018 04:53PM
kimberly_rose
is 32% done
This has weirdly and suddenly become a suspense/mystery/people-trafficking novel. I’m still game, because I like the themes, but I am taken aback by the switch from only Jason’s and Chris’s struggles to a huge, larger mystery.
— Nov 30, 2018 09:58AM
kimberly_rose
is 27% done
Really intriguing mentally and compelling emotionally. Like the power dynamics.
— Nov 30, 2018 09:27AM
