Status Updates From Mowed

The MMC is a soon to be divorced, broke, no job, car reprocessed, living in his parents basement guy and he wants the FMC to be ‘at his beck and call’ and to ‘follow his rules’. But it’s all good because has a nice ass and he’s “dreamy”.

I'm still trying to find my balance here. I like the heroine and her dialogue is hilarious but still on fence with the hero. When the heroine makes her concerns known, he gets a little testy and says either you trust me with your pleasure or we just quit it now. That's a pet peeve of mine in erotic romances. You have to earn someone's trust...esepcially in bed.

She really likes her bbq sauce

"THAT, my friend, was an orgasm. I've never had one of those before. Sure I had tiny ones when I fingered myself on the phone with you, or alone in bed, or when Gordon lasted more than a minute. But those were little baby drops of water, like a raindrop in the ocean. That...that was a fucking hurricane, right there. It was like Alka-Seltzer."

"I'd love to discuss the matter further, preferably with you naked and spread eagle on my bed while I feast upon your pussy like a man dying of starvation. I will eat you like you're a three course meal and I just got out of prison. I'm hungry, Pepper. Hungry for you."

THANK FUCK!!!! Pepper gets a backbone!!

I'm about done with the book and I'm so frustrated with our h, Pepper. I like strong independent female leads and Pepper is the exact opposite!! No self worth, no confidence, body image problems a mom who treats her like a slave and doesn't help with Peppers self confidence or body issues...WTF I need her to grow a back bone and love herself at any size!!!