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Unique idea but poorly executed
They are supposed to be 60 year old but their jokes are so juvenile It's 90% sex jokes and even a "that's what he said"
The characters are also shallow and don't act their age at all
And don't expect a mature relationship in the book; a woman obsessively falls in love with someone after they save her as if they are 14-25
It's 8hrs in and the plot is generic and boring

Average so far. All the sex jokes and banter are getting old, but there aren't as many of them as the really dreadful novels. OK I get it, there are protagonists in relationships. They flirt (awkwardly). What is it about fantasy world and VR that makes so many of these authors think "Let's crack wise about bums, boobs, and monster hoses."

Slow going. I like that the main characters are older, but the characters being retired means they lack the impetus and drive that a lot of chars in other litrpgs have, they're busy smelling the roses. That's not a terrible thing, but it's also not very interesting. They were just given some crazy good gear on a simple quest, so there's an element of Mary Sue here, and I just don't care about the MC at all yet.

Man this book is so sllloooww! I keep falling to sleep. Do not get me wrong this is a good book!