NiteHaze’s Reviews > Last Horizon: Beta > Status Update
NiteHaze
is 45% done
Unique idea but poorly executed
They are supposed to be 60 year old but their jokes are so juvenile It's 90% sex jokes and even a "that's what he said"
The characters are also shallow and don't act their age at all
And don't expect a mature relationship in the book; a woman obsessively falls in love with someone after they save her as if they are 14-25
It's 8hrs in and the plot is generic and boring
— Jan 15, 2019 03:20PM
They are supposed to be 60 year old but their jokes are so juvenile It's 90% sex jokes and even a "that's what he said"
The characters are also shallow and don't act their age at all
And don't expect a mature relationship in the book; a woman obsessively falls in love with someone after they save her as if they are 14-25
It's 8hrs in and the plot is generic and boring
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