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Dani Wilk
is on page 37 of 153
The opening few chapters feel exactly like book 1. The sex scene is all too familiar.
There are way more typographical errors in this book already than in Book 1.
It almost feels as though book 2 was rushed to the printer carelessly as a follow up to book 1.
— Jan 24, 2019 10:49AM
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There are way more typographical errors in this book already than in Book 1.
It almost feels as though book 2 was rushed to the printer carelessly as a follow up to book 1.
Kerry
is 33% done
I keep getting thrown out by the abrupt accidental tense changes.
— Feb 07, 2017 03:05PM
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Jennifer McGurk Finn
is 54% done
I don't even understand why this whore's POV is in the damn book. Fuck, I loved the first book but this one is leaving a real bad taste in my mouth ... like a shit sandwich !
— Nov 09, 2016 01:42AM
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Jennifer McGurk Finn
is 54% done
SERIOUSLY ? No one wants to read about some whore flicking her bean while she fantasizes about her MARRIED FUCKING PARTNER AND HIS WIFE !! I'm really pissed I paid $2.99 for this book and I'm an inch away from DNF it !
— Nov 09, 2016 01:38AM
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Jennifer McGurk Finn
is 15% done
If this fucking whore makes a move on Seth and he doesn't set her ass straight then I'm done with this book !
— Nov 08, 2016 11:32PM
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