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The Alien Weredragon Mail-Order Bride
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Jenny Foster (Goodreads Author)

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Francine is 14% done

— Feb 09, 2020 07:09PM Add a comment

Courtney is 68% done

— Apr 21, 2019 05:29PM Add a comment

Courtney is 68% done

— Apr 21, 2019 05:29PM Add a comment

Courtney is 41% done

— Apr 21, 2019 05:00PM Add a comment

Debra Johnson is finished

Not well written. The ending was very disappointing.
No character build. No world build. Just not well planed out.

— Apr 08, 2018 08:45PM Add a comment

Debra Johnson is 66% done

dragon, for the sake of the matter,

Improper wording, again.

— Apr 08, 2018 08:43PM Add a comment

Debra Johnson is 64% done

She knew the ship’s plans by heart and knew which way she needed to go.
A direct contradiction to an earlier section. This is the 3rd of 4th instance of contradictions in the story.

— Apr 08, 2018 08:41PM Add a comment

Debra Johnson is 39% done

She must have been thinking for too much,
The word 'much' is incorrect. Should be 'long'.

— Apr 08, 2018 08:38PM Add a comment

Debra Johnson is 10% done

She had reckoned with anything,
Needs to be reworded entirely.

— Apr 08, 2018 08:34PM Add a comment

Vicki is starting

started 4-8-18

— Apr 08, 2018 06:02PM Add a comment