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Debra Johnson
is 64% done
She knew the ship’s plans by heart and knew which way she needed to go.
A direct contradiction to an earlier section. This is the 3rd of 4th instance of contradictions in the story.
— Apr 08, 2018 08:41PM
A direct contradiction to an earlier section. This is the 3rd of 4th instance of contradictions in the story.
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Debra Johnson
is finished
Not well written. The ending was very disappointing.
No character build. No world build. Just not well planed out.
— Apr 08, 2018 08:45PM
No character build. No world build. Just not well planed out.
Debra Johnson
is 66% done
dragon, for the sake of the matter,
Improper wording, again.
— Apr 08, 2018 08:43PM
Improper wording, again.
Debra Johnson
is 39% done
She must have been thinking for too much,
The word 'much' is incorrect. Should be 'long'.
— Apr 08, 2018 08:38PM
The word 'much' is incorrect. Should be 'long'.
Debra Johnson
is 10% done
She had reckoned with anything,
Needs to be reworded entirely.
— Apr 08, 2018 08:34PM
Needs to be reworded entirely.
