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4 chapters in and these are my strong thoughts so far:
Overly detailed, as though to set the seen in a movie or play. Overdone and unnecessary for a book.
The behavior of the characters also seems quite a bit over the top.
— Jan 31, 2024 12:13AM
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Overly detailed, as though to set the seen in a movie or play. Overdone and unnecessary for a book.
The behavior of the characters also seems quite a bit over the top.
