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Reborn: Apocalypse Volume 3 (Reborn: Apocalypse, #3)
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L.M. Kerr

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Yohan Perrault is 58% done

— May 13, 2025 08:17PM Add a comment

Yohan Perrault is 52% done

— Mar 23, 2025 05:52AM Add a comment

John Doyle is 10% done

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Stephen Santos is 40% done

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Matt Landess is 95% done

— Dec 05, 2024 03:57PM Add a comment

Matt Landess is 59% done

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Matt Landess is 56% done

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Matt Landess is 35% done

— Dec 04, 2024 02:21AM Add a comment

Bobsome is 75% done

The writing is truly not good. It's been especially obvious in comparison to the physical books I've been reading at work.
The storytelling isn't terrible, but the word choices and sentence structure can be awful.

— Nov 05, 2024 02:41PM Add a comment

Bobsome is 15% done

Just finished chapter 9, and I think the writing might be getting worse.
Kerr seems to be reaching for an anime action poetic flare, but mostly just ends up using words incorrectly, causing confusion if you actually focus on what's literally written. If you just let the sentence sit in the mishmash of nouns and adjectives you can get what they're going for, but it's very immersion breaking and halting.

— Oct 29, 2024 06:00PM Add a comment