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Jyvur Entropy
Jyvur Entropy is on page 6 of 362
lots of disjointed body parts doing stuff-"my hands do x" my "feet do y"-a good editor should have caught this
Jun 28, 2021 05:34PM Add a comment
Whisper of Darkness (Banshee's Curse, #1)

Jyvur Entropy
Jyvur Entropy is starting
Not a great start. Very unnatural dialogue, where characters rehash crap they JUST did. Wayyy too much description of what sounds like a very generic hipster coffee joint. Coffee snobbery is obnoxious. Drinking coffee without sugar is not a personality
Jun 28, 2021 05:05PM Add a comment
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Nina
Nina is on page 281 of 362
Are we gonna have a “drunk mc and now her enemy has to take care of her” moment here cause I’m all for it
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