Status Updates From Running Lines (Hollywood Ho...

i foresee tension
liking it so far

DNFing at 50% i don’t think I’m gonna circle back

This is very chill…almost to the point where I’m worried there’ll be no plot

Idk why I don’t read more books set in Hollywood

I love stories involving actors. All the firsts happened very quickly, but it also makes sense that way.

This book sucks.
It's really poorly written and the entire relationship is based on "oh my god, he's hot" and, half way through, that hasn't changed. This is an unbelievable couple to have a HEA.

This is the weirdest I've read for some time. Two men during foreplay stopping to discuss whether they will have sex for the right reasons .
What? I guess men do come in all sorts and characters. Bye bye stereotypes.

Another author I found on tictock

// Annnnnnnnnnd this author lost me completely! Done with the other and done with the book … Such bullshit!!

// HOLY TYPOS!!!!

// The deeper we head into this story/book the more it’s clear that this author is new to writing and that this novel is her debut novel!

// The author needs to fine-tune her transitions as well ... you can’t be at the house one minute and at the studio the next … Show us, the readers, the drive to and from somewhere so they can have a little bit of conversation, and stop fucking paraphrasing and summarizing everything ... show us the conversation, let us see the developing relationship and friendship!!

// As great as this book has been so far I’m not very pleased with some parts in that it’s telling or paraphrasing in retrospect! I want to see see see see!! I want to see it happening in real time, I don’t want the author telling me about it, so author, kindly butt out, and show me!!

// We’re veering into “telling too much; not showing enough” territory! I don’t think that will be the case, but the author better beware! Also, instead of saying “winking face emoji”, how about just putting that emoji into the text? Some authors do that and it’s a fantastic decision, which this author specifically should follow suit on!

// This author better not be one of those authors that turns all the female characters into massive raging cunts!! Admittedly lots of women are that way, but it would be nice to have some good and decent and kind and sweet female characters as well!!

// Very very impressed with this so far!!