Status Updates From Blind Beast Mate (Beast Mat...

Aw man I’m likely not gonna like this guy making her get rid of her seeing eye dog…..

First page in and I spot a glaring error. Ugh. The book is already annoying me. I think I am going to put it down and move on. Maybe I am just *tired* if the weak fmc trope.

Yikes. Seems as if this story was written by a 12 year-old who read Nana's old bodice rippers under her blanket after everyone else had gone to bed. With one hand in her panties as she read them.

I knew it!

Wow! Dude finally finds out mate is blind 🙄

Instead of writing about how two people should be getting to know each other, it's more about BDSM. The woman is blind, and I am starting to think she's partially blind. Just nonsense. I feel like I've been reading bits and pieces from other books.

You are probably wondering, 'Why are you reading this?' The world, characters and humor keep me going. I am actually a fan of Milana Jacks.
Here is a sample:
“I’m a peach, and I’m courting her. Every day I leave her a toy on the nightstand... “What is it?” “Anal hook.”..... “You going about it all wrong, bro.” “Too soon?”...“How would you court her?” “I’d go for the anal plug.”

This shows how the dialogue needs help. It is often jumpy and awkward.

“I didn’t mean to—”
“Yes, you did. You think I bought you to put you at home so I can go whore around.”
Okay, then. I shut up, didn’t want to piss him off anymore.

I love the uniqueness of this world but, I wish it was better written. As you can see below, the wording can be jumpy. There are earlier passages in the story that show the awkwardness better, but I chose this one.

"I wanted him to know I wasn’t gonna begrudge his cheating. I couldn’t even if I wanted to. I had to put up until I got away or died. I’d love to be the only one for him. Tonight, I wasn’t..."