Status Updates From XuL (Darverius, House of Da...

Let’s see if this is better than the first . I mean I love the story goes but I need more details please!

First 20% a bit repetitive as same scenes as DaR but from a different perspective but it’s a solid 3.5 star read so far.

Yet again, I have so many conflicting feelings when it comes to this book heck to the series.
It’s all very just sweet and nice and cutesy. It kind of reminds me of an alien version of maybe a Jane Austen novel, there’s a whole lot of cording going on and a whole lot of what if and maybes.
It’s just very sweet.

Besides the terrible choices in grammar and constant incorrect capitalizations… we now have continuous terrible continuity. You have the original MMC who never encountered crying or sweating? Then that same MMC doesn’t shed his own tear but now in this book that fucking MMC’s kids are all making tears including this MMC as an adult. SO WHAT THE FUCK IS THE FREAK OUT OVER THE TEARS??? fucking shitty continuity

STOP CAPITALIZING EVERYTHING HOLY FUCK. Grandfather and Father are not names. Healing agent isn’t a name. It is a NOOOOUUUNNNNNN. You are giving them God designations.

I actually just kept highlighting them and then skipped the prologue because it actually was bothersome. Again, it feels like there are two different authors writing this because there are two distinctive styles trying to show through. It is very mentally jarring

Quite a number of editing errors just within the first page.

🥰I love this so much and I love that Kira is back with the shenanigans!!