Honest Mabel’s Reviews > XuL > Status Update

Besides the terrible choices in grammar and constant incorrect capitalizations… we now have continuous terrible continuity. You have the original MMC who never encountered crying or sweating? Then that same MMC doesn’t shed his own tear but now in this book that fucking MMC’s kids are all making tears including this MMC as an adult. SO WHAT THE FUCK IS THE FREAK OUT OVER THE TEARS??? fucking shitty continuity

STOP CAPITALIZING EVERYTHING HOLY FUCK. Grandfather and Father are not names. Healing agent isn’t a name. It is a NOOOOUUUNNNNNN. You are giving them God designations.

I actually just kept highlighting them and then skipped the prologue because it actually was bothersome. Again, it feels like there are two different authors writing this because there are two distinctive styles trying to show through. It is very mentally jarring