Status Updates From Vanquished

May have to hit pause on this. When the MMC says "we still on this?" I felt that. The FMCs internal conflict should he switching and moving. Not stating stagnant after that powerful scene. Not reverting after the flashback. That keeps tge story feeling fresh

Is he f♡cking her back to life after his facef🫶🏿ck 🌬job suffocated her?

I want to 👏🏾 the author. Smartly made the FMC older than 18. With her history and background being a college fresh at 22 makes a lot of sense. It also adds dimension to her character

"A half breed. We are the real children of America. Can't claim poor white trash or ghetto streets. "

1st time I read this book this line irritated me. My note said "racist AF". I ended up DNF at 20%. Trying to give it another whirl and yeah....the line still pisses me off. Bookthreads

"A half breed. We are the real children of America. Can't claim poor white trash or ghetto streets. "

1st time I read this book this line irritated me. I lasted until 20%. Trying to give it another whirl and yeah....the line still Ts me off.

"A half breed. We are the real children of America. Can't claim poor white trash or ghetto streets. "

1st time I read this book this line irritated me. I lasted until 20%. Trying to give it another whirl and yeah....the line still Ts me off.

Now they saying this book is dark.
Let's see how dark it is.

This book is savage! The girl thinks she's escaped her captor after running for hours from the house through the forest and when she finally breaks through the trees and gets to the road he's there leaning against his car and says "I don't like mornings, I wanna be like you when I grow up, having the urge to exercise and shit." 💀💀💀