Status Updates From Sarazen's Claim (Sarazen Sa...

This was a reread

So many annoying and irritating fucking grammatical errors.
The writing style is weird too. Lots of cringe moments in dialogue and just generally the way the story was progressing.

The idea of this story has so much potential though. And yet, lots of little things added up almost ruins it entirely. I vaguely recall some details not going to be resolved too. So ugh

ookay... the stress of it all seems to have have caught up with our girl here

Really loved this. Don't know why it's taken me so long to read.

DNF

I’m a bit bored and strangely hung up that they keep putting all the women in dresses. Dresses. And their response is to giggle. About sex stuff. I mean, where the professionalism here? The women were supposed to warriors in a military based hierarchy. But the moment they get dresses it’s all out of the window.. like they’re nothing more than their sex. I think this might be a problem with characterisation.

I read recommendations of this story, but....

It's interesting and I want to know what will happen, but...

Dear God the blurb claims it was professionally re-edited? Did Amazon send me the wrong copy? Because the editing is so bad, I doubt if I will be able to continue with the book.

Finally had the time to sit down and read last night and I'm really enjoying this book atm <3

Just casually re reading this for the 7 millionth time

Considering it's been "professionally re-edited" I'm surprised how many edits it still needs.

Excellent so far!