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Kimmyh
Kimmyh is on page 89 of 232
Jun 05, 2018 04:32AM Add a comment
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Crystal
Crystal is 78% done
The... accidentally saying you're in love during your narrative and then realizing it's true... cliché makes me extremely... extremely annoyed. And triggers my gag reflex. Will have to mark the whole thing down at least one point for that BS.
Feb 18, 2017 01:28PM Add a comment
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Crystal
Crystal is 66% done
Cyrus forgets Pickle a whole bunch.
I hope he and Blaze kill each other massively... no! wait! Gabe should kill them.

In general, I think a final, machete rewrite would have done wonders, hack it to death and sew up the pieces with a more believable set of sociopathic main characters.
Feb 18, 2017 03:02AM Add a comment
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Crystal
Crystal is 30% done
I read a review that mentioned, "show, don't tell!"

and now I can't unsee it... constantly. Also, I am so sick of women being weak and helpless in fiction. Perhaps I need to do something about myself just in case the Zs attack.
Feb 17, 2017 07:41AM Add a comment
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Crystal
Crystal is 5% done
creeeepy
Feb 16, 2017 07:05AM Add a comment
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David
David is on page 35 of 282
May 09, 2015 11:07AM Add a comment
Zombie-Apokalypse

Ignatz
Ignatz is 5% done
I've just started this book this morning and am already picking nits. To paraphrase Mark Twain: "Don't tell us the old lady screamed. Bring her on and let her scream!"
Mar 25, 2015 10:53AM Add a comment
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Lisa
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Jun 29, 2013 07:51AM Add a comment
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