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MeltingPenguins
is on page 408 of 528
Look, if you can't actually come up with a full name for a character you really should not make said character being unable to fully introduce themself a running joke. Because cheating and just describing the name as sounding well etc is not clever.
— Mar 05, 2017 07:31PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 398 of 528
So... the parties originally interested in the McGuffin shouldn't have had any intetest in it cause the thing it does would not actually have given them an advantage. At all? And they could neither have been interested in it for the dragon stuff cause they didn't know or at least could not even remotely be certain?
— Mar 05, 2017 05:23PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 371 of 528
I would almost feel sorry for him, if I would have had any sympathies for him so far.
— Mar 05, 2017 12:00PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 302 of 528
Did I mention that I hate authors that write in ways making it so bloody obvious that they want praise for their work and progressiveness while doing a shit job at either?
— Mar 05, 2017 10:43AM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 163 of 528
On a note: If you are going to have terms from a different language in your text, fictional or not, make sure it is A) a term that is actually untranslatable and/or B) a word the characters would actually use instead of a different one.
— Mar 04, 2017 03:43PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 124 of 528
Oh a short-tempered, racist, pseudo-irish/scottish drunkard... how amazingly creative and totally not cliche and bad writing...
— Mar 04, 2017 10:41AM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 91 of 528
The running gag with the guy's name was grating in the first book already. It's the kind of thing a good author drops at least when things start to get dire...
— Mar 03, 2017 02:20PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 75 of 528
So they are fighting a dragon again. Shouldn't they know just HOW to defeat one from the first fight? Y'know the obe the author conveniently skipped in the previous book?
— Mar 02, 2017 05:31PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 63 of 528
The author is STILL letting characters think in response to the narration. Ffs
— Mar 02, 2017 05:09PM
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MeltingPenguins
is on page 44 of 528
Wasn't it that they knew pretty well what the land and sea to the East look like in the previous book? Could the author please make up his mind?
— Feb 26, 2017 08:49PM
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