Status Updates From Akkadia: Gerbang Sungai Tigris

Gawd there's a lot of tell and not show in this book. Also, just stumbled upon "detail" here💀 a modern loan word in a fantasy setting ........ Alright.

Another poorly written chapter. Naia is so childish and dumb here. Typical 17 year old FMC but idk her age exactly or maybe I just forget. The old geezers are also kinda dumb. They said they had people following Naia but they don't know about Nergal?

The word "information" in a fantasy book...

The characters' relationships feel so rushed 🥴

What, he's tryna have sex with Zylia when she just lost her memories? Tho it's obvious this is just bad writing.

Teeza losing her memories is such a plot device and there's some inconsistencies so far like when Ibbsin told Teeza that Naia already knows her true identity but then here she is having doubts forgetting what she heard a few days ago.

That's so dumb... Why would they just take Niordri like that? Y'all r fugitives!!

Chapter 6 is so rushed and cringey... Like the writing quality went down a LOT here. The age gap and the development is so messy. Both Ramir and Teeza seem like they're not the same ppl from the previous chapters. Also the moment I read about Naia not wanting Fares to stop hugging her I had an inkling the romance will be cringey...

I'm so excited rereading this this is so good so far

konsep sama karakter design-nya menarik tp so far narasi agak awkward....

Semua informasi sudah disodorkan dari bab satu. Dialog panjang-panjang, isinya informasi, informasi, informasi. Sepertinya penulis lupa tugasnya selain memberi informasi, yaitu menghibur pembaca.

Semua informasi yang disebar di bab awal ini bikin elemen teka-teki minim banget. Alhasil, buka halaman berikutnya terasa berat. Karena emang nggak penasaran apa-apa buat tahu kelanjutan cerita, buat tahu nasib Naia.

masih berjuang membaca tulisannya yang kecil banget.. untung aja ceritanya menarik.. *semangat*

tulisannya kicil kicil bingitsss.. *sakit mata*

Teeza, Elanna and Zylia.
Interesting...

Teeza, Elanna and Zylia.
Interesting...

Teeza, Elanna and Zylia.
Interesting...

Teeza, Elanna and Zylia.
Interesting...

Teeza, Elanna and Zylia.
Interesting...

Teeza, Elanna and Zylia.
Interesting...

Battlenya... seru!!

Dan ukuran bukunya... kenapa kecil om? Jadi lebih tebel. Tulisannya juga rapet-rapet. Bacanya agak susah jadinya. ;(

Pembukaannya menjanjikan! Tapi saya agak lost pas bagian percakapan Naia dan Davagni tentang alasannya ngilang selama 6 bulan. Hmm...