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Rin
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I'm so excited rereading this this is so good so far
— Aug 11, 2026 08:13PM
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Rin
is on page 140 of 391
Gawd there's a lot of tell and not show in this book. Also, just stumbled upon "detail" here💀 a modern loan word in a fantasy setting ........ Alright.
— Aug 22, 2026 07:51AM
Rin
is on page 137 of 391
Another poorly written chapter. Naia is so childish and dumb here. Typical 17 year old FMC but idk her age exactly or maybe I just forget. The old geezers are also kinda dumb. They said they had people following Naia but they don't know about Nergal?
— Aug 22, 2026 07:38AM
Rin
is on page 109 of 391
What, he's tryna have sex with Zylia when she just lost her memories? Tho it's obvious this is just bad writing.
— Aug 22, 2026 01:05AM
Rin
is on page 104 of 391
Teeza losing her memories is such a plot device and there's some inconsistencies so far like when Ibbsin told Teeza that Naia already knows her true identity but then here she is having doubts forgetting what she heard a few days ago.
— Aug 13, 2026 01:53AM
Rin
is on page 87 of 391
That's so dumb... Why would they just take Niordri like that? Y'all r fugitives!!
— Aug 12, 2026 10:41PM
Rin
is on page 53 of 391
Chapter 6 is so rushed and cringey... Like the writing quality went down a LOT here. The age gap and the development is so messy. Both Ramir and Teeza seem like they're not the same ppl from the previous chapters. Also the moment I read about Naia not wanting Fares to stop hugging her I had an inkling the romance will be cringey...
— Aug 12, 2026 04:19PM