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Rin is on page 53 of 391

Chapter 6 is so rushed and cringey... Like the writing quality went down a LOT here. The age gap and the development is so messy. Both Ramir and Teeza seem like they're not the same ppl from the previous chapters. Also the moment I read about Naia not wanting Fares to stop hugging her I had an inkling the romance will be cringey...

— Aug 12, 2026 04:19PM

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Rin is on page 140 of 391

Gawd there's a lot of tell and not show in this book. Also, just stumbled upon "detail" here💀 a modern loan word in a fantasy setting ........ Alright.

— Aug 22, 2026 07:51AM

Rin is on page 137 of 391

Another poorly written chapter. Naia is so childish and dumb here. Typical 17 year old FMC but idk her age exactly or maybe I just forget. The old geezers are also kinda dumb. They said they had people following Naia but they don't know about Nergal?

— Aug 22, 2026 07:38AM

Rin is on page 123 of 391

The word "information" in a fantasy book...

— Aug 22, 2026 01:24AM

Rin is on page 122 of 391

The characters' relationships feel so rushed 🥴

— Aug 22, 2026 01:21AM

Rin is on page 109 of 391

What, he's tryna have sex with Zylia when she just lost her memories? Tho it's obvious this is just bad writing.

— Aug 22, 2026 01:05AM

Rin is on page 104 of 391

Teeza losing her memories is such a plot device and there's some inconsistencies so far like when Ibbsin told Teeza that Naia already knows her true identity but then here she is having doubts forgetting what she heard a few days ago.

— Aug 13, 2026 01:53AM