Status Updates From An Inconvenient Path

More “speedtelling” but also more direct action, with PoV both Harry and Severus. It’s okay, but I do not like the speedtelling ways here. Good plot and suspense, the reader’s foreknowledge is not guaranteed to suffice.

One character dies, another who’d died lives.

It has many good scenes between the rushed retelling, and some interesting plot directions, but still…

Pretty sure I don’t like the way this rushes through events and half-summarises them from mostly Snape’s PoV. Reading this feels like a chore, even if it started out well.