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mirabilos
is 6% done
Pretty sure I don’t like the way this rushes through events and half-summarises them from mostly Snape’s PoV. Reading this feels like a chore, even if it started out well.
— Jan 09, 2023 12:04PM
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mirabilos
is 51% done
More “speedtelling” but also more direct action, with PoV both Harry and Severus. It’s okay, but I do not like the speedtelling ways here. Good plot and suspense, the reader’s foreknowledge is not guaranteed to suffice.
One character dies, another who’d died lives.
— Jan 10, 2023 05:32PM
One character dies, another who’d died lives.
mirabilos
is 25% done
It has many good scenes between the rushed retelling, and some interesting plot directions, but still…
— Jan 09, 2023 03:58PM
