Status Updates From Clockworks and Corsets

Ok this sucks... I should not finish it.

Ok I know this is suppose to be humors but a lot of it is just plain not funny humor of the narrow minded kind - and yep that sounds really harsh but it is really distracting for me. The sex scenes are mostly good, now if the scenes in between were as nice it would be good. But the "native" man is potraited as the simple savage that has good instincts and is easily trusting while the civilized women need his help.

This is oddly written. A bit melodramatic, withto little sex and a native Polynesian man that is pursuits in a way that feels exploytive. But mostly it is just melodramatic. Good idea but not lacking excursion

A machine just for female pleasure. Hmm... how enjoyable *grin*

"Ruby clutched herself with a sigh while visions of world domination danced in her black heart." My kind of woman!

"Gabriella stood in awe of the thing, amazed a the impossible size of it. Jayne, however, caressed the obstruction with pale, trembling hands." Get your minds out of the gutter. They are talking about a wall. LOL!

"Even with her bloomers full of sand, she was having the time of her life." Imagine that!

"Gabriella smiled at the sound of her name on his lips. Rose recognized the smile for what is was. She dragged the child halfway across the world to teach her some independence, and the kid had to go and fall for some lunatic living in an abandoned laboratory." Loving this Steampunkery Novella already!!

Not my usual cup of tea, but the writer has a lot of fun with her genre.