Sidsel Pedersen’s Reviews > Clockworks and Corsets > Status Update

Ok I know this is suppose to be humors but a lot of it is just plain not funny humor of the narrow minded kind - and yep that sounds really harsh but it is really distracting for me. The sex scenes are mostly good, now if the scenes in between were as nice it would be good. But the "native" man is potraited as the simple savage that has good instincts and is easily trusting while the civilized women need his help.

This is oddly written. A bit melodramatic, withto little sex and a native Polynesian man that is pursuits in a way that feels exploytive. But mostly it is just melodramatic. Good idea but not lacking excursion