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AJA
is 82% done
I guess I don’t mind the 6 viewpoints but I would have a separate chapter for each and tell the whole story back to front for each person. That way I don’t lose the thread of what’s happening. I barely followed ayse adventure looking for the mellified man and it was the second most interesting plot!
— Sep 12, 2026 05:47AM
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AJA
is 66% done
Dang this just ain’t hanging together. I guess there is still a chance for a stunning ending but Deffo dragging rn.
— Sep 11, 2026 06:39PM
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AJA
is 57% done
Darn starting to lose the thread of one or two of the story lines…
— Sep 10, 2026 07:22PM
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AJA
is 43% done
I cant believe how well he is juggling 6 different povs and all are interesting
— Sep 09, 2026 07:42PM
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AJA
is 10% done
A lot of characters introduced all at once but that’s ok. The story is interesting so far!
— Sep 07, 2026 05:19AM
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Esteban
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10 jours que j'ai commencé et j'ai lu que le premier chapitre (qui correspond au premier jour)...jsuis pas sûr de tenir jusqu'au bout j'avoue
— Jun 17, 2026 02:41PM
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