Status Updates From Breaking Point (The Order o...

It only took 150 pages but things have started to progress and I find I am enjoying the characters and their relationships much more.

This one is taking a long time to read...it feels so slow. But, the story has potential so onward in hopes of more action soon!

"The voice in Phoebe's ear was right-Dorian still needed her. He still loved her. Only Kali was responsible for this..."
.....YA THINK???!!!! GRRR! Phoebe is such a frustrating protagonist.

What is it with Phoebe and her outbursts! They're really starting to annoy me. She's dependent on Dorian and bordering annoying rather than sweet...

Kali just needs to go:

But of course with all the great characters (Phoebes, Ethan, Lucy, Cynthia, Evan, Jared and Dorian) there's also gotta be one person that no one can stand. Book was abit slow at the start but with all the elemental-kick butt action and romance going on, I'm getting into it. 4/5

Well, this isn't exactly what I was expecting. And not in a necessarily good way. :/
The romances had so much potential....and just, no.

Okay so it has gotten better i am used to the writing now so i do not notice how bad it is just please tell me she is not going to talk to much more about that damn unicorn

I am trying to look past the writing though it is getting on my nerves. but seriously you chose a fire unicorn?!?!///\\\ when is that ever a good idea? maybe when I was two but come on...please get better!

So the writing seems to be falling apart. It is still interesting but it is not as smooth as it should be. Her words are not flowing for me. If anyine else has read this book please let me know if you thought so too, or if it is because I just got done reading water for elephants which had exceptional writing.

It is pretty interesting so far, she has the ability to feel what others are feeling. This is telling her that her moms is really worried about her upcoming birthday. Also it sometimes has her in love with somebody when really it is someone else that is in love and she is just getting that persons emotions.

Kind of waiting on really reading this because I am focused on Water for Elephants at the moment!

Excited to read this! Got it for $1 on nookbook!