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Kelley
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I am trying to look past the writing though it is getting on my nerves. but seriously you chose a fire unicorn?!?!///\\\ when is that ever a good idea? maybe when I was two but come on...please get better!
— Sep 21, 2011 05:58PM
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Kelley
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Okay so it has gotten better i am used to the writing now so i do not notice how bad it is just please tell me she is not going to talk to much more about that damn unicorn
— Sep 22, 2011 09:59PM
Kelley
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So the writing seems to be falling apart. It is still interesting but it is not as smooth as it should be. Her words are not flowing for me. If anyine else has read this book please let me know if you thought so too, or if it is because I just got done reading water for elephants which had exceptional writing.
— Sep 21, 2011 03:17PM
Kelley
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It is pretty interesting so far, she has the ability to feel what others are feeling. This is telling her that her moms is really worried about her upcoming birthday. Also it sometimes has her in love with somebody when really it is someone else that is in love and she is just getting that persons emotions.
— Sep 18, 2011 12:57PM
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Kind of waiting on really reading this because I am focused on Water for Elephants at the moment!
— Sep 16, 2011 04:00PM
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crossing my fingers for u, hoping your book doesn't put u to sleep or cause you to "accidentally" spill coffee on it. ;)
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haha the story has gotten a little better but man the writing is driving me CRAZY! And i still get mad everytime she mentions her silly little Fire Unicorn horse named Saphire (because of the eyes) man that part really bugs me and the guy has some animal they call a griffin because it is half eagle half lion!!!! WHAT!!! that is just some of the weirdest stuff ever!
a griffin is a very well known mystical animal in history. its been used in several cultures..well, at least a version of it anyway. U know, in that book "witches of east end", the sister ingrid has a pet thats a griffin. They don't talk about it much, just mention it here and there. I guess every witch had a special kind of animal and they were allowed to keep theirs. Freya has a cat and their mom has a raven. IDK, unicorns...not sure about that one. lol. and naming it sapphire was pretty predictable if it has bright blue eyes. at least they didn't name him "snowflake" or something like that (since im assuming its white, like most unicorns are). im glad its getting a little better though, perhaps its aimed for a younger audience who day dreams about owning their very own white fire unicorn named Sapphire. lol.
Yea i had thought the name sounded familiar but everyone ekses xompanions are normal horses or a riger or a polar bear stuff like that so a unicorn and a griffin do not really fit in. If you knkow what i mean and i have not gotten down to reading witches of eastwick yet. Ha i hope this is aimed for a younger audience but there is a lot of romance in itt and the girl main character has a love interest who is 67 but looks 19 (the age of the main character) because in this world they live to be about 400 years old. But yeah saphire that would have been like calling ren cobalt or kishan goldy. But i shouldnt complain because i got it for 99 cents on my nook :)
U got a nook! haha. how do u like it?
hmmm, i don't know how i would feel about the book you are currently reading. sounds a little....novice? missplaced? idk. do u ever just put a book down half way through?
Soooo, i just finished writing the guideline notes for my vlog for tigers voyage. im going to record it tomorrow and send it via URL to the vlog thing. I already did Tigers curse and i wanted to submit them both in the same day, but i got very busy today and couldn't dedicate enough time to it. I hadn't finished my notes, and Tigers Quest is such a long, action packed, eventful book, that the notes of my thoughts were just flowing out of me. seriously though, this book made me very emotional. just writing the notes, especially for the vision that kelsey had with lokesh in it, and when they went to rescue him, were hard for me to type. i must be a big baby, but torture for me is a very touchy subject, i've just always been really sensitive to the idea. Maybe because i know it actually happens to real people every day. People do unspeakable things to other people in this world, and it wasn't something that is purely fictional so it really got to me.
did u do any vlogs for the draw for tigers voyage? :)
hmmm, i don't know how i would feel about the book you are currently reading. sounds a little....novice? missplaced? idk. do u ever just put a book down half way through?
Soooo, i just finished writing the guideline notes for my vlog for tigers voyage. im going to record it tomorrow and send it via URL to the vlog thing. I already did Tigers curse and i wanted to submit them both in the same day, but i got very busy today and couldn't dedicate enough time to it. I hadn't finished my notes, and Tigers Quest is such a long, action packed, eventful book, that the notes of my thoughts were just flowing out of me. seriously though, this book made me very emotional. just writing the notes, especially for the vision that kelsey had with lokesh in it, and when they went to rescue him, were hard for me to type. i must be a big baby, but torture for me is a very touchy subject, i've just always been really sensitive to the idea. Maybe because i know it actually happens to real people every day. People do unspeakable things to other people in this world, and it wasn't something that is purely fictional so it really got to me.
did u do any vlogs for the draw for tigers voyage? :)
I like it a lot actually i only got it like 3 days ago though.i have a nook app on my computer so i was reading it on there for a short while. I have to say thee book suprised me a little in the end. Review soon too come :)I still have yet to do a vlog. I was camping friday night till just now so i have been out of wi fi range.
I have not actually ever put a book down i am weirdly optimistic when it comes to books. I have a nagging feeling that it will getbetter i just have to be patient for it. That way when i finish i know for sure if it was really that bad or if it got better. Which this one definitely did. I sadly however was not aware it is the first in a series of 5 and none but the first are out yet :( she leaves the book off on a terrible cliff hanger which kinda ticked me off. I want to know what happens Now haha and there isnt even a release date posted anywhere so i have no ideea. This one waspiblished in 2010 so it should be out by now. Uh very frustrating!
