Kelley’s Reviews > Breaking Point > Status Update

Okay so it has gotten better i am used to the writing now so i do not notice how bad it is just please tell me she is not going to talk to much more about that damn unicorn

I am trying to look past the writing though it is getting on my nerves. but seriously you chose a fire unicorn?!?!///\\\ when is that ever a good idea? maybe when I was two but come on...please get better!

So the writing seems to be falling apart. It is still interesting but it is not as smooth as it should be. Her words are not flowing for me. If anyine else has read this book please let me know if you thought so too, or if it is because I just got done reading water for elephants which had exceptional writing.

It is pretty interesting so far, she has the ability to feel what others are feeling. This is telling her that her moms is really worried about her upcoming birthday. Also it sometimes has her in love with somebody when really it is someone else that is in love and she is just getting that persons emotions.

Kind of waiting on really reading this because I am focused on Water for Elephants at the moment!