Status Updates from All Editions of Expectations (Expectations, #1)

Jess is 80% done

— Apr 01, 2019 10:29AM Add a comment

Jess is 60% done

— Feb 19, 2019 12:37PM Add a comment

Jess is 50% done

— Feb 18, 2019 09:16AM Add a comment

Jess is 30% done

— Feb 11, 2019 12:56PM Add a comment

Jess is 20% done

— Feb 11, 2019 07:04AM Add a comment

Jess is 10% done

— Feb 10, 2019 06:32PM Add a comment

Lee Brazil is 20% done

— Nov 01, 2012 09:09AM Add a comment

Keith is 38% done

Love the interaction between the brothers

— May 16, 2012 08:07AM Add a comment

Mark is finished

— May 01, 2012 03:25AM Add a comment

Maria Mercedes is 90% done

— Mar 30, 2012 06:49AM Add a comment

Maria Mercedes is 5% done

— Mar 20, 2012 05:05PM Add a comment

Joy is 54% done

OK, OK, the plot is picking up but my previous critique remains valid.

— Mar 15, 2012 06:09PM Add a comment

Joy is 47% done

this is one of the most repulsive scenes I've ever read.

— Mar 15, 2012 04:01PM Add a comment

Joy is 40% done

Oh, wow, this really awful. I'm sorry, but it is :( Clunky, awkward, error-filled, and uninspired prose, and no sense of dramatic or sexual tension. The characters are OK but nothing stays unresolved long enough to be compelling. All the dramatic stuff seems like an afterthought! I'm starting to be unwilling to suspend disbelief, but will persevere! (I just learned there ARE tobacco farms in Ireland. Who knew?)

— Mar 15, 2012 01:04PM 1 comment

Joy is 40% done

Oh, wow, this really awful. I'm sorry, but it is :( Clunky, awkward, error-filled, and uninspired prose, and no sense of dramatic or sexual tension. The characters are OK but nothing stays unresolved long enough to be compelling. All the dramatic stuff seems like an afterthought! I'm starting to be unwilling to suspend disbelief, but will persevere!

— Mar 15, 2012 01:03PM Add a comment

Joy is 40% done

Oh, wow, this really awful. I'm sorry, but it is :( Clunky, awkward, error-filled, and uninspired prose, and no sense of dramatic or sexual tension. The characters are OK but nothing stays unresolved long enough to be compelling. All the dramatic stuff seems like an afterthought!

— Mar 15, 2012 01:01PM Add a comment