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Joy
is 54% done
OK, OK, the plot is picking up but my previous critique remains valid.
— Mar 15, 2012 06:09PM
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Joy
is 40% done
Oh, wow, this really awful. I'm sorry, but it is :( Clunky, awkward, error-filled, and uninspired prose, and no sense of dramatic or sexual tension. The characters are OK but nothing stays unresolved long enough to be compelling. All the dramatic stuff seems like an afterthought! I'm starting to be unwilling to suspend disbelief, but will persevere! (I just learned there ARE tobacco farms in Ireland. Who knew?)
— Mar 15, 2012 01:04PM
Joy
is 40% done
Oh, wow, this really awful. I'm sorry, but it is :( Clunky, awkward, error-filled, and uninspired prose, and no sense of dramatic or sexual tension. The characters are OK but nothing stays unresolved long enough to be compelling. All the dramatic stuff seems like an afterthought! I'm starting to be unwilling to suspend disbelief, but will persevere!
— Mar 15, 2012 01:03PM
Joy
is 40% done
Oh, wow, this really awful. I'm sorry, but it is :( Clunky, awkward, error-filled, and uninspired prose, and no sense of dramatic or sexual tension. The characters are OK but nothing stays unresolved long enough to be compelling. All the dramatic stuff seems like an afterthought!
— Mar 15, 2012 01:01PM
