Despite the massively traumatic backstory/worldbuilding, despite the awkward writing voice, I was really into this one. But ngl... my commitment is weakening the lomger Eliano keeps his silence about everything that happened on the mainland. So far, that just feels COMPLETELY contrived, given how he feels about Salt. (Even accounting for the I-won't-spoil-it person whose wishes Eliano is respecting.) #notahappyreader
— Mar 24, 2026 02:12AM
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