Feeling weird about the writing style. It's little details like a society that doesn't use the word 'day' somehow still having 'Teflon', as well as ongoing things like the strange, kind of overwrought sentence structures. It's also WAY jargon-y, with things like: "Connla and Singer had sensoed my feed, downloaded the full experience from my fox, and re'd the ayatana of the spliced-in switches."
Contemplating a DNF.
— Aug 16, 2020 12:52PM
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